4 Ways to Make Sure Your Book Proposal Stands Out

Later today I’ll be discussing about fifteen book proposals with my editorial colleagues. We’ll review them with an eye toward deciding which ones should move on to our publishing board (where publishing decisions are made) and which ones should be declined. The reality is only a small number will move on.

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Imagine your book proposal is in this stack. How do you make sure it stands out? I’ll highlight four possible ways.

1. Great Working Title and Subtitle

Not very often, but every now and again we see a title that we all know is a winner. If you have a title like this, you’re fortunate! Examples of this kind of title include:

But honestly titles like these are few and far between. As I look at my bookshelves, I see a lot of solid titles, but most of them are the result of an intense titling process which occurred after the books were contracted.

So if you have a truly standout title, terrific. If not, try to come up with one that’s good enough. I recently wrote a post about how to do this. (Click here to read it.) Then capture the other leading contenders and move on.

2. Powerful Marketing Plan

I’ll never forget the book proposal I received that had over fifty unique marketing ideas. Our team knew it would be impossible to execute all of them. We also knew doing so wouldn’t be the best thing for the book.

But we were blown away with the author’s creativity and obvious commitment to marketing. Nobody comes up with over fifty marketing ideas without caring about promotion. We were impressed, and we pursued the book vigorously, as did other publishers.

3. Amazing Writing Sample

Of these fifteen or so proposals I’m about to review, I can almost guarantee there will be at least one that looks pretty good in terms of concept and marketing plan, but the writing sample will torpedo it, sadly.

Remember that your writing sample is the thing we as a publishing house are thinking about actually sending into the world! Work hard on it. Try creating something so compelling that anyone with a pulse couldn’t possibly put it down.

That’s a tall order, I know, but an amazing writing sample is another way to get your book proposal to stand out.

4. A Definitive Throwdown Statement

My friend Gary Neal Hansen referred me to a video in which Steven Pressfield and his agent talk about how a throwdown statement helped Steven win a book contract. Watch the clip here.

I like the idea. I’m not sure how long they would say a throwdown statement should be, but one or two sentences seems about right to me. Pressfield says a good throwdown statement should answer these three questions:

  • Why this topic?
  • Why you?
  • Why now?

Let me throw out some examples. I’m just making these up. These books don’t really exist as far as I know.

  • Former CEO who grew his company’s revenues from 0 to $150 million in ten years shares why workplace culture is more vital to success than anything else.
  • Pastor in Atlantic City empowers Christians to go into scary places to bring healing to the hurting, hope to the desperate, and salvatoin to the lost.
  • Christian-turned-atheist-turned-Jesus-follower shares his journey of losing his faith because of science and regaining it because God did the inexplicable.

Hopefully these throw-down statements give you a sense of how compelling they can be. A brief, strong throwdown statement captures attention by casting vision powerfully.

Question: So if you had to pick just one of these ways to get your book to stand out, which one seems the most realistic to you? You can leave a comment by clicking here.

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9 thoughts on “4 Ways to Make Sure Your Book Proposal Stands Out

  1. Thanks for the tips.

    In considering a book launch type, it’s hard for me to narrow down whether I want to go long term launch and self-publish a full-length book or continue attempting to send my proposal to publishers.

    I see the advantages and disadvantages of both as you’ve covered previously, but it seems to me the expenses needed to self-publish a great book (editing, any paid marketing / promotion, quality design) in a sense off-set the traditional publishing options. In addition, it also seems the time requirements between long term self-publishing and working through a traditional publisher are close to the same.

    Is either statement accurate? And with that being said, I feel I need to work on the throwdown statement the most to help polish my proposal and snag the attention before it gets tossed into the pile…

    “Pastor reveals how every individual can discover if God says something is right or wrong for their lives.”

  2. Throw down: Secret Love Triangles: Couples with unresolved trauma have no idea there is an invisible intruder in their bed!
    Throw down: There are no more immaculate conceptions! all abortions affect fathers too.
    Throw down: How Can I Count it All Joy when I Fail; learning and applying spiritual resilience to restore purpose and identity.
    Throw Down: I know Who I am and I Don’t Like Me! Understanding Personality Assessments From God’s POV
    Idea: I Don’t Have to Drive in 5th Gear All The Time, Slowing Down at 200 mph. A Study of the Driven Personalities

  3. I have to content that the writing is what makes the difference. Make it authentic, lively, filled with description and dialogue and a point of view. Timing and rhythm are important and can be honed to perfection. Turn cliches on their heads, let your characters have unexpected thoughts. Take the reader for a ride.

  4. Hey, thanks for the shout out, Chad!

    I am working on all four, but especially the writing sample.

    Marketing and throw-down are learnable. Coming up with a great title seems to be a particular gift. So far I’ve not seemed to have it. But if I can be, as you say an “experience architect” in my writing, that makes the book itself what it needs to be.

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